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enigma
post Apr 7 2004, 11:55 AM
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Hey, redesigned my biz website in an attempt to make it a LOT more professional and 'warm'. I think I've succeeded, comparing it to my last version. :blink:

Can I please get your opinions on this, as it will basically be my main source of business exposure - therefore, I want it to actually be able to 'sell'! :unsure:

:D Especially BM, you seem to be very visually coherent when it comes to design and can give really good advice / comments! PLEASE!! :D

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post Apr 7 2004, 03:28 PM
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QUOTE (enigma @ Apr 7 2004, 12:55 PM)
Can I please get your opinions on this, as it will basically be my main source of business exposure - therefore, I want it to actually be able to 'sell'! :unsure:

I'm no design guru, so this is just a personal opinion.

I think it looks really nice mate. I like the colours and I don't think it looks too busy.

What I will emphasise though is, if you want to be professional, you must not have spelling errors on there.

On the front page you have currency spelled with an 'a', ie. currancy.
On every list page you have manufacturer spelled with an 'o', ie. manufacturor. There may be others I never spotted.

Nothing puts people off more than seeing a really well designed site full of bad spelling. It gives the impression that more time was spent on design and not enough on content.

Fix that up and I think you're looking good mate. :)

~Bear :)
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