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(IMG:http://www.ozgfx.black-winter.com/gallery/albums/album02/art0001.jpg)

i made this image while waiting to goto lunch and see girlfriend and after finshing some homework and i like the feel of it

[TWINE006]

I don't like it too much. It seems to have no focus or shape for such a large amount of color in the image. I think the blue is a bit too dense over there on the left there by the middle. I'd suggest cutting back on the blue streak-things overall, make the background a darker color, and possibly even use a darker hue of blue (I prefer darkness in images). I think it's a nice piece of work for a quickie-image, but there's a bit more to be done for it to really come together. Would make a nice background (if really darkened up) for something else (to add focus to the pic overall).

Of course, all these suggestions are all pretty broad and vague. I see this pic as having a lot of potential and you could really do a lot of things with it to bring it forward (or leave it the hell alone if you like it... but not before slapping me for being a fool, lol).

This post has been edited by TWINE006: May 20 2004, 03:26 AM