i got alot of nice comments for this one at neo but i didn't know that people would like it i couldn't think of what else to do
Lets see nFm's opinion

Pretty neat.
Needs a splash of color... maybe...

Dang I like it that is pretty cool.

To be honest, I don't like this one very much. It's better than anything I could do at the moment, sure, but I still don't like it much. I think the background is kind of cool but I completely dislike the whole light overlay design-thing (for lack of a better word). I just think the picture as a whole is too gray and bland. Add in some more color or just make the background more vibrant or something... I don't know.

Still, technical-skills wise, nice job.