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What do you gusy think of my semi logo design ??

(IMG:http://www.ozgfx.black-winter.com/index.jpg)

of course without the shit fdown the bottom

[Blue_Muppet]

i think your on the right track, but it could use a little touch up.

my thought are:


1. Orange is your colour, and it looks good on black. but that doesnt mean you are limited to those two colours. try for a cleaner look by reducing the image saturation of the two colours, and try adding mroe, or even white?

2. the box looks like a PS/illustrator stamp. if you use a containing area like that, try for straight keylines, and really fine.

3. people naturally read left to right. right to left, esp with capitals on every word, makes it tough for the eye to follow, and the mind tends to wander then.

4. id use a lighter, proper arrow. PS has great custom arrows.

5. you got the web address wrong.


man, im sorry to pick at it like this. you really are on the right idea, you've just got to tweak a little and you'll suddenly be presented with a range of uses for this.