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^ATOMIC^	May 17 2004, 04:33 AM Post #1
Resident Gfx Guru Group: Moderator Posts: 137 Joined: 19-March 04 Member No.: 45	What do you gusy think of my semi logo design ?? (IMG:http://www.ozgfx.black-winter.com/index.jpg) of course without the shit fdown the bottom -------------------- \| ozgfx \| Black-Winter \|

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May 19 2004, 12:26 AM

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QUOTE (Blue_Muppet @ May 18 2004, 02:50 PM)

i think your on the right track, but it could use a little touch up.

my thought are:

1. Orange is your colour, and it looks good on black. but that doesnt mean you are limited to those two colours. try for a cleaner look by reducing the image saturation of the two colours, and try adding mroe, or even white?

2. the box looks like a PS/illustrator stamp. if you use a containing area like that, try for straight keylines, and really fine.

3. people naturally read left to right. right to left, esp with capitals on every word, makes it tough for the eye to follow, and the mind tends to wander then.

4. id use a lighter, proper arrow. PS has great custom arrows.

5. you got the web address wrong.

man, im sorry to pick at it like this. you really are on the right idea, you've just got to tweak a little and you'll suddenly be presented with a range of uses for this.

thx bm don't be sorry you pick at it that is why i post it here becasue i know that people like you give me the feedback i need to continue doing what i love to do and if no one gives you consructive critasisum then how will you improve or make things beter. If only more people would give the ammount of feedback that you do it could make the world of diference to how people look at what they have done and see the fine details that you haev picked at. Now time to fix it up abit and get working on a new layout i started one yesterday saved it then deleted it ebcasue it was crap. So i've gotta sit down and start doing some stuff and teh i'll post it here like i always do for some constructive criasisum and ideas. From more people hopefuly but thx again for you commets bm

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^ATOMIC^ Semi Logo May 17 2004, 04:33 AM

^ATOMIC^ or if u think you can maek me one do so :P May 17 2004, 04:34 AM

Messenger 'tis a bit "plain" - not really to y... May 17 2004, 09:59 AM

^ATOMIC^ lol i know but i was thnking minamal this is not l... May 17 2004, 12:08 PM

Blue_Muppet i think your on the right track, but it could use ... May 18 2004, 02:50 PM

^ATOMIC^ thx bm don't be sorry you pick at it that is ... May 19 2004, 12:26 AM

artzelda I am not an artist and so don't take my commen... Jun 4 2004, 12:47 PM

boxcrash I like where you are going and how you are thinkin... Jun 6 2004, 06:13 AM

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